Overall, I am happy with my feedback. I felt as if we struggled with creating the audience profile, especially regarding the detail, so agree with the comments that it needed developing and possibly reconstructing. We have since changed our ideas of a house burning to a shots of a destroyed dolls house, as we too realized it would be difficult to film. Regarding the fight scene, I agree with the comments given however we thought that we had been instructed to take the background sound out. I plan to add in the points that I was lacking in some of my class notes but am generally very happy with the comments given from my teacher in response to my analysis', research, homework and blog in general.
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