Title Sequence Feedback/Audience Response

After presenting our clips to the class,  they gave us audience feedback. They decided that our camera movement was quite shaky at points, which we agreed with and did attempt to resolve beforehand by overlapping some clips during the production stage. Regarding the absence of our originally storyboarded nursery rhyme, the class suggested that our sequence may be eerier if we added it back in or maybe record some children giggling but, whilst we want our sequence to be creepy, we did attempt this during the production process and it didn't work. We also aren't sure where it could go in the sequence and so we're still debating this.

The class also suggested that our font was not clear enough, due to the colour and suggested a white instead. We originally wanted the colour of our font to be red to connote the horror genre however there are some parts of the sequence where the red makes it difficult to see and so are in the process of adjusting the colour.